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Self-Editing for the Self-Publishing Author

Writer: Lizette EppsLizette Epps
A wooden table is arranged with an open laptop, a stack of books, and a notepad with a pen resting on top
A wooden table is arranged with an open laptop, a stack of books, and a notepad with a pen resting on top

Editing can often seem daunting, but it is a critical step in the self-publishing journey that will make or break your book's success. It doesn't matter if this is your first or fifth book; knowing how to edit your manuscript effectively can help you produce a polished, professional book that attracts readers and stands out in a crowded market. In this article, we'll explore the key aspects of editing your manuscript, including essential tools, common editing mistakes to avoid, and practical tips for improving your writing. Let's dive into the editing world and take your manuscript from good to great!

 

Understanding the Editing Process for Self-Publishing

 

Every author dreams of having a perfectly polished book in their hands. Skipping steps in the self-publishing process, like editing, will leave you with something that doesn't meet the mark. While editing can seem like a vast and daunting process, it makes a huge difference in producing a professionally polished book. Today, we will take a look at the three primary forms of editing and discuss the different purposes each has.  

 

The first one we will tackle is developmental editing. This is where the editing lens focuses on the content of your book. Everything from the structure and flow of the book, the connection of chapters from one to the next, gaps in your plot, or inconsistent ideas will be identified in this phase of editing. A good developmental editor will be able to help you shape your book into the masterpiece that you envision.  

 

Line editing is next and focuses on the words and style of writing you use.  This goes beyond grammatical errors and considers the book's tone, chapter by chapter.  Line editors will refine your writing to ensure that the words flow clearly and consistently so that you have easy writing for readers to engage with.   The absolute last step before publishing and releasing your work is proofreading. This is where formatting errors, typos, and punctuation are fixed.

 

While hiring an editor is highly recommended, I firmly believe in the empowering process of self-editing. You should start editing once you feel your first draft is complete, but well before you start formatting your book and designing the cover.  It's crucial to read your manuscript aloud, use editing tools, and take breaks between reviews and revisions to gain a fresh perspective and catch errors. This process puts you in control and boosts your confidence in your writing.

A well-edited book boosts credibility, reader trust, and overall success.

 

Tools and Resources for Self-Editing Your Manuscript

 

So, you've finished your manuscript, CONGRATS! Now it's time for self-editing, where you will work on refining your words and polishing your story before sending it off to an editor or publisher. But the big question in front of you now is, where do you start? Thankfully, there are plenty of tools and resources to help.

 

First up is software. Grammarly and ProWritingAid are two powerhouse options for catching grammar slip-ups, awkward phrasing, and overused words. Grammarly is great for quick fixes and clarity, while ProWritingAid dives deeper with style suggestions and in-depth analysis. If you want something more tailored, tools like Hemingway Editor highlight overly complex sentences, helping you sharpen your writing. Beyond software, online resources can be lifesavers. Editing guides walk you through the revision process, while style guides (like The Chicago Manual of Style or AP Stylebook) ensure grammar, punctuation, and formatting consistency. Never underestimate a good thesaurus, whether it's Merriam-Webster's online version or Thesaurus.com, as these tools help you find the perfect word without repeating yourself.

 

The key is choosing what fits your editing style. If you struggle with grammar, Grammarly might be your best bet. If your writing is solid but needs better flow, ProWritingAid or a style guide could be the way to go. Figure out what you like and use what works for you! Having the right tools at your disposal will make the editing process smoother and more effective, leaving you feeling equipped and prepared.


Grammarly editing tool infographic
Grammarly editing tool infographic

Common Editing Mistakes to Avoid

 

Editing is where the magic happens, but it's also where common mistakes can slip through the cracks. One of the biggest issues writers run into? Overlooking typos and grammatical errors. For instance, confusing 'their' with 'there' or 'your' with 'you're '. You can't rely solely on spell check, so take the time to read your work out loud and use a fresh set of eyes to catch those sneaky mistakes. Mistakes will be inevitable and even the best authors and writers miss things, but you want it to be few and far between.

Poor sentence structure and pacing are also key issues in writing. When your sentences are too long, you lose your reader.  At the same time, you don't want your sentences to be too short or choppy because you can also turn your readers off. Finding a smooth flow will keep your writing engaging.

 

Another writing trap is repetition. Using the same words too often or saying the same thing in different ways will make your writing feel heavy and redundant.  Remembering the writing rule of "writing tight" is essential to keep the words flowing in a way that won't confuse or weigh down the readers.  

When I first started writing, I learned about the dreaded plot hole.  With my first book being non-fiction, I didn't think it applied to me, but I quickly realized it did. 

 

Regardless of the type of story you're telling, you have to ensure that the information aligns logically and flows sensibly. Inconsistencies in the flow will lose the reader in the story and cause them to fall out of the experience you are laying out for them. 


My last and probably most crucial editing tip is not to edit in isolation. Step away from your work to have a fresh perspective on your writing.  At the same time, you can also share a draft with a trusted friend or family member so they can provide you with feedback.  Doing so can help you see what you might have missed and help you know where you can make improvements to make your writing the best it can be.

 

The infographic displays a side-by-side comparison of common editing mistakes, showcasing ‘Before Editing’ and ‘After Editing
The infographic displays a side-by-side comparison of common editing mistakes, showcasing ‘Before Editing’ and ‘After Editing

Practical Tips for Polishing Your Manuscript

 

Now that you know self-editing is the real magic of your masterpiece, we can focus on some practical things you can do in the process. Polishing and refining your work until it shines will make a huge difference in the quality of work you are putting out into the world.   As I mentioned, the first step is to read your work, but the trick is to read it aloud. It might feel strange, but it is beneficial when you can hear the rhythm of your sentences. This will allow you to catch awkward phrases and unnatural dialogue. Your next step? Take a break. Step away for a few days or weeks because the distance will allow you to return with sharper eyes and a fresh mindset. 

 

Every manuscript requires trimming; my tip is to be ruthless when it's time to trim. Remember, the key is to write tight! Get your message across consistently and concisely with the least amount of words.  Remove filler words like really, just, very; they add fluff, not substance. Look for redundancy in your writing. If you've said it once, you DO NOT need to say it again. When you are reading aloud, your dialogue should sound natural and flow.  It shouldn't sound choppy or like people reading from a script. If you write for characters, ensure each has their personality and voice.  Ensure that their actions align with the personality you have written for them.  You don't want a good guy in your story doing villainous things. 

 

Lastly, remember that formatting matters. Use clear and easy-to-read fonts, double spacing, and proper paragraph breaks to make your manuscript easy to read. A well-formatted manuscript makes life easier for editors and readers alike.

 

The Role of Beta Readers and Professional Editors 

 

Beta readers and professional editors are critical in shaping your manuscript into a polished, compelling book. Beta readers are the equivalent of a test audience for your book. These people will provide honest feedback and reactions to your story before it goes to an editor. When choosing beta readers, find people who represent your target audience and have a good eye for detail. You don't just want writers; you will want to include avid readers because they will offer insightful feedback on pacing, character development, and overall readability. Providing them with specific questions to guide their feedback is most helpful.  As for you, ensure you can be open to constructive criticism without taking it personally. You want people to poke and prod at the work so that you can produce the best writing possible.  

 

Once you've gathered all of your feedback, look for patterns. If multiple readers point out the same issue, address it and correct it. Once you've accounted for the beta reader edits, it's time for a professional editor to step in.  Skilled editors don't just fix typos; they refine your structure, strengthen your voice, and ensure clarity and consistency in your work.  Working with an editor is a collaborative process, not just a service for hire.  Communicate clearly with the editor about what you are trying to achieve.  What message do you want readers to take away from your writing?  Ask questions, and again, stay open to feedback and revisions.  A good editor will not try to change your voice; they will help elevate your writing so your book shines.

 

Remember. . . 

 

Editing your manuscript is a non-negotiable step in the self-publishing process. Still, it doesn't have to be daunting at all. Understanding and taking the editing process one step at a time will make it a palatable process for you.  Take the time to use the right tools and focus on avoiding common pitfalls to produce a high-quality manuscript ready for publishing.  Self-editing is not just about correcting mistakes but more about enhancing your voice and ensuring your story shines. If you're prepared to take your manuscript to the next level but need guidance in the self-editing or publishing process, I'm here to help! Whether you need tips on refining your writing, navigating the publishing world, or understanding what comes next, let's connect. Reach out to me, and let's make your book the best it can be!

 
 
 

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